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Friday, September 21, 2018

What is a flood?a flood is a water that comes over land.

How and why do floods happen?
Floods are caused by heavy rain and it  makes a Flood to.

What should you do if ? a flood happens? If there is a flood climb a mountain.

What is the impact of a flood on people, animals and buildings?the reason why buildings fall on a flood is because the flood makes big waves like a tsunami.
INTRO -
WHAT: Blindfold challenge.
WHERE: room 7
WHY: For fun
WHEN: Friday 21st September 2018, 9.10am
HOW: got into buddies, Miss Ashley arranged the furniture
WHO: Room 7 students

PARAGRAPH 1:
  • Get in buddies
  • Miss Ashley gave instructions and rules - points.
  • In your head, made a plan of which way to go
  • Say who your buddy was.
PARAGRAPH 2: WHEN YOU WERE BLINDFOLDED
  • Feelings: paralysed, nervous, scared, excited, sleepy, felt comfortable because I had done it before, trust my buddy??? Felt like i was going the wrong. Felt like a robot.
  • How did it feel to have a blindfold on?
  • Happened: lost points because we touched the paper/tables, fell over,
  • Banged into each other.
  • Table pushed me to the side
  • Furniture was like spikes in Fortnite.
  • Screaming like it was a justin bieber concert
  • Kaboom
  • “ahhh”
PARAGRAPH 3: WHEN YOU WERE TELLING YOUR BUDDY WHERE TO GO
  • Tell them to “go straight, go left and right, go on the chair and jump on it, crawl, climb over, duck, stop stop stop, lean over, reach out, grab the chair, step over, confirm or deny”
  • Felt like the general of an army, an army of one.
  • Felt like: excited, angry, nervous, strong, fearless, in control,
CONCLUSION: (Choose one of these)
  • My favourite was..
  • I felt ..
  • It was easy/hard because..
  • I would or wouldn’t do this again because...




WRITE YOUR STORY HERE.
On Friday 21st of september 2018 9am room 7 students got into buddies miss ashley arranged the furniture then the partner had to blindfold the other partner in the front.






When I  was blindfolded I felt lost in the woods/forest.when tipene was blindfolded I felt like I was a police guiding/looking after the blind prisoner.when I was blindfolded tipene told me to take a humongous steep then he tell me to crawl like a spider under the table.when I touched the chair I feel like a tower falling to die from a earthquake.



When miss called out our names we had to stand up and say to them turn right left and straight.you weren't allowed to touch the table and the papers and you weren't allowed to touch the door.but some people could walk on the chairs that the only thing you could touch.



It was hard because i fell and i lost points for my team.I felt lost in the dark forest and I felt challenged.my favorite obstacle was the second one because it made me challenge the game.









WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED:
Author:

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One thing that (name) needs to work on:adding more detail.











Thursday, September 20, 2018

Tuesday, September 18, 2018

planning for writing

PLANNING FOR WRITING.

INTRODUCTION:
WHAT: partner yoga challenge
WHERE: inside Room 7
WHEN: Monday 17th September 2018, in the morning, first thing in the morning
WHO: Room 7 students
WHY: have fun
HOW: miss had a slideshow, kids in partners.

KEYWORDS
  • Flexible, splits, lift, push, hold yourself up, hold hands, clasp hands, grip, hips, shoulders, balance, fall, collapse, tumble, flattened,

PARAGRAPH 1:
  • Roll, got into partners, move the furniture away,
  • Miss explained what we were doing
  • First pose -  easy, happy, going to get harder, confused, confident, trust and feel comfortable with partner

PARAGRAPH 2:
  • Challenging
  • Making shapes with our bodies
  • Keeping calm, trying your best
  • Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
  • Which ones were really HARD?

PARAGRAPH 3:
  • Most complex or difficult poses..
  • Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
  • Which ones were really HARD?

CONCLUSION:
  • My favourite one was..
  • The hardest one was...



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First thing in the morning miss Ashley explained what special activity.  we felt excited and happy. I was getting confused but the hard one was the last
one.
We were getting into the first one it was easy cause you just have to sit down and hold hand and look up to the roof.

2 paragraph

Author: michael
Checked by:lopi
Recount checklist ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
Surface features
Searched
Found
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Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
Capital ‘I’


Capital letters for names of places and people
Full stops at the end of a sentence


Speech marks when people are talking
no
no
no
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
No
no
no
Words are written in past tense


Connectives - next, then, afterwards
no
no
no
Interesting and difficult adjectives
no


Deep features



Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how

no

Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt



Ideas/events in the right order



3 paragraphs



Metaphors and similes



Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom



Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex



One thing (name) did well was…

One thing (name) need to work on is…