car crash

Brainstorm of ideas:

• Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, firefighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
• See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
• smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING	PROBLEM	SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,	Car crash	A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see	injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts	Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone	Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.	Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Title:	Car crash?!!!
Intro 2 sentences	Once Upon a time there was a man called Havea He was going speed in the car but suddenly he went on a bumpy side and then the car flipped over.
Orientation 5-10 sentences WHEN WHO WHAT WHERE WHY HOW CHARACTERS	When the man was driving he was picking something up but suddenly he crashed on the side of the pole so the car flipped over. The windows broken and the airbag came out and hit Havea. So the people that was around the car’s were calling the firefighter’s. When the fire engines were near the people heard the alarm of the fire engines. They smelt smoke coming out of the car.
Problem 5-10 sentences	When there was smoke coming out of the car it caused a fire so the firefighter’s got the hose and hose the fire that’s in the car. Havea went hospital and stayed their about ½ years. The fire engines.
Solution 5-10 sentences	Havea speed up in the car so it gave the car more energy  to speed up. So when he crashed the car flipped over.
Conclusion Less than 5 sentences	The fire engines were cutting half of the car with a big sixes. One of the tires must of fall of and the car must of went on the bumpy track.