5 symbols The sky is light blue
7 symbols and how old am i to you,
5 symbols i am 5 to you
Hi my name is michael leuta and i tried my best to do a Haiku poem.
AWESOME! haiku Michael this is great! i like the way you thought of this and did your hardest.
ReplyDeletekeep up the great work!!!!
thanks for your feedback everyone
DeleteKia Ora Michael,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this haiku activity as I love to read poetry and I think haikus are a very fun form of poetry with their syllable rules and simplicity. It is great to see that you had a go at this activity and tried your hardest.
I thought you did a really great job with your haiku, you follow the 5, 7, 5 syllable rule correctly and your haiku tells a sort of story.
To step up your work you could try writing a couple more haikus and record yourself reading them aloud and adding it to this post.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates