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Thursday, June 28, 2018

Twinkle star

facts about the sun

intro

Once upon a time there was a young beautiful girl called snow white. She was lost in a creepy,scary forest.she has 3 step sisters and brothers. Her dad was so so rich. But snow white was poor because she was lost. When she  found her parents the guards took her to the dad. The dad didn't remember her so snow white went in the “dungeon”.

southern cross

postcards in space

Tuesday, June 26, 2018

car crash

Brainstorm of ideas:
  • Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, firefighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
  • See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
  • smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking


PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.




Title:
Car crash?!!!
Intro
2 sentences
Once Upon a time there was a man called Havea He was going speed in the car but suddenly he went on a bumpy side and then the car flipped over.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
When the man was driving he was picking something up but suddenly he crashed on the side of the pole so the car flipped over. The windows broken and the airbag came out and hit Havea. So the people that was around the car’s were calling the firefighter’s. When the fire engines were near the people heard the alarm of the fire engines. They smelt smoke coming out of the car.
Problem
5-10 sentences
When there was smoke coming out of the car it caused a fire so the firefighter’s got the hose and hose the fire that’s in the car. Havea went hospital and stayed their about ½ years. The fire engines.
Solution
5-10 sentences
Havea speed up in the car so it gave the car more energy  to speed up. So when he crashed the car flipped over.
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
The fire engines were cutting half of the car with a big sixes. One of the tires must of fall of and the car must of went on the bumpy track.

the magician elephant

There was a nice, accurate 11 year old boy that was named Peter in a small village called Ansvill.
The small boy walked a long way when suddenly he stopped at a bright rose red tent.
The little boy said .“Should I go inside”the boy said.

Then he walked slowly across to the tent.He stared at everyone, he looked lonely, shy, afraid and nervous. Peter was terrified and shy to go in the tent. He was lost and he had no one to live with. He was staring at the tent like a picture. Nothing could help cause he can't do this anymore so he felt like he was losing all the faith in the lord so his tears were starting to pour.

Monday, June 25, 2018

Haunted house

Start here: This house is the creepy house it is haunted. Jake and jacob are friends got traped as soon as they went inside A room. But then this man called david had A gun he was A police he saw someone's shadow coming across the room. When the old man that lived in the house went where the stair’s is when the police saw him he killed the creepy old man the police took the keys and free the people. The police felt like A hero to the people.

Of cause he’s A police.

when was the first planet discovered


Thursday, June 21, 2018

co-constructed

Food is inside
Playing with matches
FireplaceTitle: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative
Labels: writing


House on fire
Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming
Put the fire out with water hosesImage result for fire house
Smoke is strong
Problem - there might be people inside?!
PS4 is still inside. - valuables
Clothes are inside.
Might be cats or dogs inside

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.
Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.


Title
Fire in the house
Introduction
One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation
Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem
Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution
Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion
The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Friday, June 15, 2018

video


picture


This girl has orange hair she a freng and plats her hair is in the air. She's at the beach with a monkey the monkey has yellow fer and on the girls Shoulders. The girl has big teeth in the front and its white. She’s wearing yellow and white t shirt. Her eyes look like it got punched in the eyes by a boy.  

solar systm


how seasons work

seasons

Tuesday, June 12, 2018

Wednesday, June 6, 2018

Tuesday, June 5, 2018

Friday, June 1, 2018

pollution

Pollution