Tuesday, September 25, 2018
Colon and semi-colon.
BEFORE: BETWEEN;
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mary went to the fruit shop and bought lots of different fruit. She bought: bananas; pears; apples; and a pineapple.
The girls team had 10 players. The team was: Hiria; Ana; Maria; Vina; Lily; Vaiola and Maani.
My examples:
The rugby team had 9 players paula;timote;Isia;michael;davlyn,havea;fereti leon and keru.
Soccer team leon keru and havea.
Commas in listing.
Miss Ashley’s example: The girls team had 10 players. The team was Hiria, Ana, Maria, Vina, Lily, Vaiola and Maani.
My examples:
Brackets.
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mum gave Lucy (her favourite daughter) $10 for lunch.
Miss Ashley had 27 students (both girls and boys) in her class.
My examples:
BEFORE: BETWEEN;
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mary went to the fruit shop and bought lots of different fruit. She bought: bananas; pears; apples; and a pineapple.
The girls team had 10 players. The team was: Hiria; Ana; Maria; Vina; Lily; Vaiola and Maani.
My examples:
The rugby team had 9 players paula;timote;Isia;michael;davlyn,havea;fereti leon and keru.
Soccer team leon keru and havea.
Commas in listing.
Miss Ashley’s example: The girls team had 10 players. The team was Hiria, Ana, Maria, Vina, Lily, Vaiola and Maani.
My examples:
Brackets.
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mum gave Lucy (her favourite daughter) $10 for lunch.
Miss Ashley had 27 students (both girls and boys) in her class.
My examples:
Pe
Yesterday on Monday 24th September after lunch Room 7 was going to head out for PE. They had earnt their free time last Friday, but it was raining so we couldn’t go out and I had promised them we could go next week instead. So PE it was…
After lunch room 7 had milk and Miss Ashley was reading a story about hunger games’ which is our class read aloud.Next we took a vote about what game we wanted to play for PE.We took a vote what to play for P.E,miss Ashley said we were not allowed to play golden child;bull rush or invisible touch.so we decided to play softball.But then miss changed her mind and we agreed we would play 20 minutes of softball then we play 20 minutes of touch (or any other game we wanted to play) afterwards.
We headed outside to the bottom field and waited for Waiari and Sumuree to bring out the softball equipment. I called “year 6’s line up behind Syariah-Lee and year 5’s behind Havea”. They did, then I instructed them to do paper scissors rock which Havea won.havea decided to bat so the year 5’s were sitting down waiting for there turn.and the year 6’s went in their places on the field.The first person to throw the ball at me “I said i am ready”.
In the end the score was 12-5 to the year 6’s. We stumbled around trying to pack up and headed back upstairs to get our bags. It was a nice afternoon playing with the students while I was feeling exhausted.
We were playing what miss call ‘easy rules’ where there was no fowls or anything, because it makes the game take longer and I wanted to ensure everybody got a turn.
“5 minutes to go and play!”. They all ran off. Some played touch; others played passes; others played races.The people were playing touch their names were timote;paula;Isia;Michael and lopi.
After lunch room 7 had milk and Miss Ashley was reading a story about hunger games’ which is our class read aloud.Next we took a vote about what game we wanted to play for PE.We took a vote what to play for P.E,miss Ashley said we were not allowed to play golden child;bull rush or invisible touch.so we decided to play softball.But then miss changed her mind and we agreed we would play 20 minutes of softball then we play 20 minutes of touch (or any other game we wanted to play) afterwards.
We headed outside to the bottom field and waited for Waiari and Sumuree to bring out the softball equipment. I called “year 6’s line up behind Syariah-Lee and year 5’s behind Havea”. They did, then I instructed them to do paper scissors rock which Havea won.havea decided to bat so the year 5’s were sitting down waiting for there turn.and the year 6’s went in their places on the field.The first person to throw the ball at me “I said i am ready”.
In the end the score was 12-5 to the year 6’s. We stumbled around trying to pack up and headed back upstairs to get our bags. It was a nice afternoon playing with the students while I was feeling exhausted.
We were playing what miss call ‘easy rules’ where there was no fowls or anything, because it makes the game take longer and I wanted to ensure everybody got a turn.
“5 minutes to go and play!”. They all ran off. Some played touch; others played passes; others played races.The people were playing touch their names were timote;paula;Isia;Michael and lopi.
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Monday, September 24, 2018
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Here is our edited story.
Things we learnt about were
We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.
Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.
The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.
Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.
On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game.
Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“ However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina. We had to line up by the heater in our buddies.
First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy) put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.
Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!
I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.
Things we learnt about were
We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.
Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.
The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.
Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.
On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game.
Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“ However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina. We had to line up by the heater in our buddies.
First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy) put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.
Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!
I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.
Here is our edited story.
Things we learnt about were
We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.
Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.
The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.
Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.
On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game.
Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“ However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina. We had to line up by the heater in our buddies.
First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy) put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.
Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!
I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.
Friday, September 21, 2018
What is a flood?a flood is a water that comes over land.
How and why do floods happen?
Floods are caused by heavy rain and it makes a Flood to.
What should you do if ? a flood happens? If there is a flood climb a mountain.
What is the impact of a flood on people, animals and buildings?the reason why buildings fall on a flood is because the flood makes big waves like a tsunami.
INTRO -
WHAT: Blindfold challenge.
WHERE: room 7
WHY: For fun
WHEN: Friday 21st September 2018, 9.10am
HOW: got into buddies, Miss Ashley arranged the furniture
WHO: Room 7 students
PARAGRAPH 1:
- Get in buddies
- Miss Ashley gave instructions and rules - points.
- In your head, made a plan of which way to go
- Say who your buddy was.
PARAGRAPH 2: WHEN YOU WERE BLINDFOLDED
- Feelings: paralysed, nervous, scared, excited, sleepy, felt comfortable because I had done it before, trust my buddy??? Felt like i was going the wrong. Felt like a robot.
- How did it feel to have a blindfold on?
- Happened: lost points because we touched the paper/tables, fell over,
- Banged into each other.
- Table pushed me to the side
- Furniture was like spikes in Fortnite.
- Screaming like it was a justin bieber concert
- Kaboom
- “ahhh”
PARAGRAPH 3: WHEN YOU WERE TELLING YOUR BUDDY WHERE TO GO
- Tell them to “go straight, go left and right, go on the chair and jump on it, crawl, climb over, duck, stop stop stop, lean over, reach out, grab the chair, step over, confirm or deny”
- Felt like the general of an army, an army of one.
- Felt like: excited, angry, nervous, strong, fearless, in control,
CONCLUSION: (Choose one of these)
- My favourite was..
- I felt ..
- It was easy/hard because..
- I would or wouldn’t do this again because...
WRITE YOUR STORY HERE.
On Friday 21st of september 2018 9am room 7 students got into buddies miss ashley arranged the furniture then the partner had to blindfold the other partner in the front.
When I was blindfolded I felt lost in the woods/forest.when tipene was blindfolded I felt like I was a police guiding/looking after the blind prisoner.when I was blindfolded tipene told me to take a humongous steep then he tell me to crawl like a spider under the table.when I touched the chair I feel like a tower falling to die from a earthquake.
When miss called out our names we had to stand up and say to them turn right left and straight.you weren't allowed to touch the table and the papers and you weren't allowed to touch the door.but some people could walk on the chairs that the only thing you could touch.
It was hard because i fell and i lost points for my team.I felt lost in the dark forest and I felt challenged.my favorite obstacle was the second one because it made me challenge the game.
WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED:
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Thursday, September 20, 2018
Tuesday, September 18, 2018
planning for writing
PLANNING FOR WRITING.
INTRODUCTION:
WHAT: partner yoga challenge
WHERE: inside Room 7
WHEN: Monday 17th September 2018, in the morning, first thing in the morning
WHO: Room 7 students
WHY: have fun
HOW: miss had a slideshow, kids in partners.
KEYWORDS
- Flexible, splits, lift, push, hold yourself up, hold hands, clasp hands, grip, hips, shoulders, balance, fall, collapse, tumble, flattened,
PARAGRAPH 1:
- Roll, got into partners, move the furniture away,
- Miss explained what we were doing
- First pose - easy, happy, going to get harder, confused, confident, trust and feel comfortable with partner
PARAGRAPH 2:
- Challenging
- Making shapes with our bodies
- Keeping calm, trying your best
- Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
- Which ones were really HARD?
PARAGRAPH 3:
- Most complex or difficult poses..
- Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
- Which ones were really HARD?
CONCLUSION:
- My favourite one was..
- The hardest one was...
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First thing in the morning miss Ashley explained what special activity. we felt excited and happy. I was getting confused but the hard one was the last
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We were getting into the first one it was easy cause you just have to sit down and hold hand and look up to the roof.
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Author: michael
Checked by:lopi
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